Well it's my first critique ! XD
I love the work overall here's the breakdown of what bothers me and what I find cool.

Pros:
- Loving the drawing, face is nice, body is done well although I think you could have made her hips a tiny bit bigger.
-The shaded clothes vs unshaded skin is cool!
-Nice use of positive and negative space, especially important in such a high contrast black and white work.

Cons:
-Smudge is EVIL. I don't know if you used it, but it looks like it and it's BAD! XD Her clothes are too smudgy it reduces the impact the picture could have. In fact I think that plain black would have worked better. But if you want to keep the airbrushed feel (as I said the unshaded vs shaded does look cool) I would advice to add some sharp shadows mixed in it. The airbrush/hard shadows combo will give a much better and polished looking picture, you can also put the hard shadows on a separate layer lock it and then airbrush them it gives a nice effect : ) And even while working only with airbrushes it's important to play with airbrush sizes mixing very big zones with almost sharp looking shadows.
- Her hands could have used more work, they lack some definition and look more like forms then hands.
- The folding on the dress is unclear especially as to why there are no folding on our left side. If it's because she's lifting a lower part of her dress it should be made clearer.

And that's it, the cons part is bigger only because it takes longer to explain what I find wrong then to explain what works ^^' Overall as I already said I love the picture, in fact, I don't critique pictures I don't like ^^

Halright, let's write us a critique for dah bunneh. :3


Well, I am definitely digging the perspective for this one sir, she looks like she's coming off as big, but kinda isn't.

The detailing on her is also nice, loving the shining on the clothing and the hair details. Her breasts are also quite nicely shaped.


The clothing could use a bit more detailing though, perhaps some more details to the bottom portion. Her breasts could also use a bit of shading to give it a bit of a round feel. Other than that, I think this image is pretty solid. Nicely done sir.