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[link] <- page 2 of previous version

Rebooting the old comic. Gonna makeover all the old pages. Well, assuming people still care. So the views/favs on this better be good if you want me to keep going. Keep in mind that if I keep going I will likely pass where I was before and continue, and may even expand a bit on some of the existing pages.

So fav and tell a couple friends please :D

Critiques


:iconzewhatcher:
First off, the coloring adds a lot to your comic. A lot of comics lose something when they get colored, however yours, having seen both the black and white version and this one, has improved greatly from it. The lines are cleaner, the text much easier to read.

Though I wonder why she has a picture of herself on her desk?

Another thing, why is she grumbling about losing her job when they are still asking her to do things? In a normal internship, you get fired, you pack up and security escorts you out.

The anime look to this is fabulous and well done. I love her horns in the last panel. Pulls off the mood perfectly.

Overall the vision is good. 4 stars. :D

The originality is ok. I have seen lots of stories and several pictures in my years of being on the internet about BE pills.

The technique is perfect in my eyes. The lines are clean, the coloring superb. :)

The impact is good because you grabbed my attention and held it.

Keep up the good work!

Now they need to come up with some belly expansion pills...
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:icondremare:
Color! Yay! : D

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:icontrigun1462:
more pages too hopfully thank god

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:iconblkgli:
Nice! Color :D

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:icongaforb:
this was probably my favourite expansion comic, so seeing it in colour is great! cant wait for more pages!
:icongtsfanman1987:
woohoo! Colored version! the coloring is incredible on it. the Original is just as good too. can't wait to see more of it.

keep it up. ^__^

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:iconserith:
Nice to see supplements getting some love. Full speed ahead, keep it up, yay! X3

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:iconslime-series:
I love this comic and the characters! Great coloring job and I hope you will continue!
:iconsomahiru:
Supplements is back and reloaded!
I guess that will be an awesome move for a lot of people, keep it up kokido! :#1:

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