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Supplements V2 001 by kokido Supplements V2 001 by kokido
[link] <- page 2 of previous version

Rebooting the old comic. Gonna makeover all the old pages. Well, assuming people still care. So the views/favs on this better be good if you want me to keep going. Keep in mind that if I keep going I will likely pass where I was before and continue, and may even expand a bit on some of the existing pages.

So fav and tell a couple friends please :D
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:iconzewhatcher:
First off, the coloring adds a lot to your comic. A lot of comics lose something when they get colored, however yours, having seen both the black and white version and this one, has improved greatly from it. The lines are cleaner, the text much easier to read.

Though I wonder why she has a picture of herself on her desk?

Another thing, why is she grumbling about losing her job when they are still asking her to do things? In a normal internship, you get fired, you pack up and security escorts you out.

The anime look to this is fabulous and well done. I love her horns in the last panel. Pulls off the mood perfectly.

Overall the vision is good. 4 stars. :D

The originality is ok. I have seen lots of stories and several pictures in my years of being on the internet about BE pills.

The technique is perfect in my eyes. The lines are clean, the coloring superb. :)

The impact is good because you grabbed my attention and held it.

Keep up the good work!

Now they need to come up with some belly expansion pills...
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Opai-Exedra Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, I don't need a PHD in Hentai to know where this is going. :thumbsup::XD:
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:iconwezlo:
Wezlo Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
You've done such an awesome job with the color, it gives it new life and it adds to the story! I hope you decide to pick this back up and work on this some more. <3
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Aaron1314 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012
REDO THEM ALREADY PLZ, THIS COMIC IS AWESOME
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:iconfartfaceguy:
fartfaceguy Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012
are you ever going to continue this, kokido?
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:iconpikachu4prezident:
Pikachu4Prezident Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012
I wonder when you'll get back around to this? This comic's awesome.
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:icongoku-senpai:
Goku-Senpai Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012
...aaaaaaand they just leave those kinds of things just laying around
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:iconblacktothefuture:
Blacktothefuture Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Duuuuuuuuude! This was yours? Favorited. Right. Now.
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:iconkokido:
kokido Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011
Where on earth did you see it that you couldn't tell it was mine? XD
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:iconblacktothefuture:
Blacktothefuture Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I...I can't remember really. An expansion site maybe? All I know is I thought 'this was awesome, wish it didn't just end but it's chill'.

Then I see it here and I'm all "DUUUDE! Destiny man. Most excellent" and then I was Keanu Reeves apparently.
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:icon6-qubed:
6-Qubed Featured By Owner May 25, 2011
I still care!

I mean, I just finished archive binging, but I care!
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:iconwwwjack:
wwwjack Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
lol
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:icongaara599:
Gaara599 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2011
I love this comic
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:iconhunterlawolf:
HunterLaWolf Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
My loli-senses are sensing a disturbance! D:
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:iconwolfbane001:
wolfbane001 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2010
Yeah, I think I see where this is going. Heheh
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:iconmariohunter:
mariohunter Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2010
CONTINUE THE DANG STORY ALREADY! The tension is killing me.
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:iconsamio85:
samio85 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2010
Con...tin...ue! Con...tin...ue! Con...tin...ue! Yay!
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:iconchumasu:
ChuMasu Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes continue this comic :D
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:iconfoule:
Foule Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2009
YES! There is some sense of justice at last! O: Great works like yours must be continued by any means... so help me if they are people that get "OFFENDED" by your awesome works... -_- I'LL STRANGLE THEM! O:
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:icontrigun1462:
Trigun1462 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2009  Hobbyist Filmographer
bigger boobs for her?
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:icontamatown50:
tamatown50 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2009
looks alot better in colour!
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:icondante8411:
Dante8411 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2009
What? That counts as "disposing of"! Of course, it might be better to ask WHY they need disposal...
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:iconminionthirteen:
MinionThirteen Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2009
please please please bring it back!! this is my favourite B.E comic and i loved reading it, your sense of humour is also rather amusing.
i would love to see some continuation aswell, cant get enough of a good thing or so they say. TY!!
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:iconparuser:
Paruser Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
Ooh! Looks like it'll be even better than last time!
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:iconmariohunter:
mariohunter Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
please go on. i was waiting so long for more.
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:iconayujih:
ayujih Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
Wow! It's not completely dead. Please, keep going!
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:iconlevia-the-dragon:
Levia-the-Dragon Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009
horaay for colour, not to mention a more justified plot and the smae great, quirky humor.
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:iconruggedoutlaw:
RuggedOutlaw Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009  Student Digital Artist
Assuming people still care? Oh! We care!
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:iconstrangerataru:
Strangerataru Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
And thus it begins.........again.........
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:iconkageswings:
KagesWings Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
The fun of Supplements 1 returns, eh? This'll definitely be worth waiting for.
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:iconvortixus:
Vortixus Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2009
This looks much better in color. It's awesome that you've started up on this again. Here's to it going past the originals and much further beyond.
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animec20 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009  Professional General Artist
very good but two stars now stan lee i give five stars.
becouse of realizzum.
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:iconzabuzabotz:
Zabuzabotz Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
niiice ^^ looks better in color ;)
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:iconzonzalee:
zonzalee Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009
Believe it or not that's not a good idea...
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:iconthevalidperson:
TheValidPerson Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009
LOL you finally put it in color, looking forward to your future color-in's
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:iconblazeodu:
BlazeODU Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009
Well this is a most pleasant surprise. I almost thought you had lost interest in the Supplements series, and yet, here you are COLORING them! Epic PWNAGE!!! ^_^
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:iconsonicfull:
SonicFull Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009
KEEP GOING
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:iconschonburger:
Schonburger Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009
[mbison]YEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS.[/mbison]
I'd love to see this redone in color!
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:iconomegadeath01:
OmegaDeath01 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
LMAO.......very very funny.
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:iconblackfang2:
blackfang2 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009
its good move & a bad move to
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:icontheman555:
Theman555 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009   Filmographer
YAY colur!! I leiks yur comik!
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:iconsigel4ever:
sigel4ever Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009  Student General Artist
muahuahuahauhauahah
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:iconleonkatlovre:
LeonKatlovre Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I read this page and it makes me laugh every time I do
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:iconiboughtheradrink:
iboughtheradrink Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009
I give this the thumbs up. I loved your original comic.
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captain-Jane Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009
You did an amazing job on the coloring for this one I love it.
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:iconnyanova:
Nyanova Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009
..your lineart is epic..
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:iconpsychoface123:
PsychoFace123 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009
cant wait to see it all in colour, i had to leave some parts up to my imagination with the b and w.
MY IMAGINATION SUCKS
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:icongijohn:
GIJohn Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009
Shiny colours :3

'and may even expand a bit on some of the existing pages.'

Play on words or can we expect some extra curves? :P
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:iconswordofnimes:
SwordOfNimes Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009
Supplements... RELOADED!
W00t! Do it for teh lulz!
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:iconechowing:
EchoWing Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Supplements redone? In color? Yay!
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:iconjrdude:
JrDude Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2009
KEEP GOING I DEMAND JUU!
=P
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